Godsnake

by Haardin van Doren

Godsnake
by
Haardin van Doren
copyright © 1995
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commercial distribution prohibited

Note: Hello. This is my first story. I was interested in writing something original. This story concerns a great carnivore that is worshipped as a divine being, the Godsnake, in which a village sacrifices women to appease it. Being intelligent and a massive Constrictor snake, this monster loves to "play with its food". The story contains a violent overtone, with explicitly sexual situations. All persons and events in the story are fictitious, and resemblance to anyone or anything is purely coincidental. Since I do not have internet access (long story), Spore has agreed to post this story from the States. Send comments, suggestions to him at [email protected] Please be kind! Its a first! Oh yeah, blantant non-constructive flames will be entirely ignored. Constructive criticism is welcomed. Enjoy! (or hate!) ....your choice.

Part One:

Valorey awakened suddenly to the lash of a cane. Raising her arms against more blows by instinct, she peered dazedly at the two figures that stood before her. Whack! The cane once again struck her back, wielded by a tall dark haired woman that Valorey recognized as her former maid servant. "Don't bruise her Maera. She must bear no marks of mistreatment to be a suitable offering to the Godsnake." dryly remarked the shorter muscular man beside her while examining a small sheet of parchment in his right hand. Maera halted in mid-strike and grimaced at the Lord's command, but her features slowly melted into a cynical smile. Maera lowered her arm and walked up to the beautiful woman laying on the floor. Maera's intense jealousy played on her face. Even beneath the strain of imprisonment, Valorey's beauty was obvious, and much greater than her own. Her former mistress' medium frame was maned with waist length raven black hair, sea green eyes and perfectly proportionate breasts. "Lord Kerrain, this woman destroyed my life, allow me the simple pleasure of..." Whump! Maera savagely kicked Valorey in the stomach mid- sentence and screamed in her face "...expressing my displeasure with the someone WHO BACKSTABBED HER MOST LOYAL SERVANT!" Valorey rolled into a defensive position to ward off Maera's violence. Lord Kerrain quickly grabbed Maera by the shoulders and spun her around to face him. His face was livid with anger. "Perhaps you would like to be fed to the Palisade Griffons!" he threatened quietly. Maera quickly calmed down, Kerrain's anger was as genuine as it was rare. Kerrain never bluffed and was religiously honest. "Valorey was CHOSEN! She must remain unmarred and perfect to be accepted by the Godsnake. Do you dare threaten the entire city of Palisade with the Godsnake's wrath for your pathetic vengeance?" Kerrain peered hard at Maera whose mocking smile long vanished with the surge of Kerrain's wrath. Realizing he'd lost his temper, and not quite understanding why, Kerrain released Maera from his battle hardened grasp. More gently, Kerrain continued, "Maera, say what you wish to Valorey and then begone. Your presence here is unorthodox and Rector Amadhi would disapprove. Do not forget it is my friendship for your husband that I allowed you here at all." Maera shook her head "I am sorry my lord, my hatred dies hard. this filth lured my husband into a tryst that broke our marriage, while I served her, there was nothing I could do! Now my husband's last words in the Battle of Pomaahd were for this witch and not me!" Maera inhaled deeply to ward the sobbing that threatened her demeanor. She looked back to Valorey, who now was sitting against the cell's wall. "Valorey. I pray to the High Lords that the Godsnake will inflict on you three times the pain I've endured under your will. It is said the Great Serpent knows of the true heart of each and every human in Palisade. Perhaps in its wisdom he knows your body will poison him and after crushing your flesh he will not consume it, but leave your body to bloat and rot in the Fens. Then your soul will be the whore to ten thousand devils, raped for eternity." Maera seemed be pleased with her tirade, even though Valorey was calmly watching her without reaction. Lord Kerrain was growing impatient. "Out! Now!" Maera backed away immediately, reminded of his earlier threat and shot one last venomous glance at Valorey, who returned it by lowering her head. Kerrain watched Maera leave until the guard re-locked the cell door. He turned back to Valorey and knelt down in front of her, looking at her for the first time. Gods! she was beautiful! The threadbare cotton shift she wore revealed much of the woman's voluptuous body. Her breasts! Her lips! Her hair was wild like a stallion's mane and draped partially over her bare thighs. Her legs were long and just muscular enough to belay the woman's skill at dancing. Kerrain's upper lip began to perspire when he thought of the perfect shape of her sex hidden between those limber legs. Valorey noticed Kerrain's distraction to her pussy, and drew up her legs into a crosslegged sitting postion. His eyes widened at the spread delta of thighs. Yes, she thought, he's entranced by me. "My lord?" she timidly asked, "would you sit and listen to my last confession?" The spell was broken by her voice. Embarrassed, Kerrain wrested himself back to his ordained duty as Captain of the Guard to hear the last confession of the Sacrifice. "Of course my lady." He stood back up and looked at her with pity. The Godsnake knew whom he wanted as sacrificial flesh and revealed this to Rector Amadhi, the High Priest of Palisade and Avatar of the Great Serpent, known only as Godsnake. Such a pity a human of such beauty was always chosen. Kerrain read the parchment he was holding, a holy order of Sacrifice written by the Rector. A standard discourse, the holy order was drafted by the first Rector when the Godsnake's will, and terror, was first known by the earliest inhabitants of Palisade. "Lady Valorey of Palisade, the Great Serpent has chosen you for his sacrifice. Your sacrifice is not only great to the Godsnake, but to the people of the Palisade who will once again enjoy protection from its enemies of Kaarn and the Tucumbri who perpetually threaten our peace." Kerrain's eyes glanced at Valorey and realized she was intently listening, and ..ah.. absently stroking the tender white flesh of her inner thigh. "Th- th- the love and protection Godsnake...uhm, who adopted Palisade as his own. He destroys its enemies and loves its people. Our gratitude is expressed by offering seven perfect citizens for the Godsnake's feast each year at daybreak, one at each conjugate Double Moon when the Godsnake's eyes can see the entire earth and the minds of all living things." The earth was ruled ultimately by three Higher Gods, the BrightSun of day and the twin moons Eros and Thanatos. Seven times each year, the two moons were in full phase in the same part of the sky. The two moons looked eerily like the slitted eyes of a serpent. These were the eyes of Godsnake. Kerrain watched Valorey over his parchment, she was softly rubbing herself all over. Kerrain's mind wandered as he remembered King Jharael's mid-summers celebration. Lady Valorey was called to dance for the king. She entered the Feast Hall wearing a gossamer fine white silk halter tied between her breasts with a thread lace. Her pantaloon bottoms made of the same fine silk, and practically transparent. She was ringed with beads and silk tassles that enhanced the dance she performed. Her dance was furious, sensual and precise. None could perfect it. Kerrain remembered the stiff erection his cock achieved during the dance, and smiled when he remembered even the venerable King Jharael excused himself immediately after the dance to refresh himself. Every male in that room was as stiff as the throne room pillars, such was the magic of her dance. Now she lay before him, a victim to be murdered by an immense Constrictor snake with demi-god powers. Kerrain looked again at the parchment, paused, then folded it away. The rest of the discourse seemed unnecessary, this beautiful woman he loved for years should be comforted, not terrified, before her death. The immensity of her death should be honored by more than 1200 year old standard discourse. He knelt before Valorey whose bright green eyes regarded him with interest. Kerrain looked earnestly at her, "My lady, the truth of the Godsnake! It loves to torture its victims. I have witnessed this when we throw our war prisoners to him. He hunts them, captures them and conveniently lets them escape, just to re-catch them. Humans are merely edible toys to this monster!" Kerrain couldn't stand it any longer. "I hate seeing beautful women thown to him, but I'm sorry, it is necessary! Without these sacrifices the Godsnake would destroy more and forsake this great city. Palisade would be no more! The Godsnake's powers are mighty and only by our sacrifice is it happy with us and returns our love! My Lady, if it were within my power to do so, I'd take you from this place forever, out of the Godsnake's control. WeUd live together as lovers beyond the Northaarn Forests" Kerrain confessed his feelings blantantly to her. Valorey merely smiled at him. "I understand my Lord, the Godsnake must live for Palisade to live." She saw her chance. "My lord, I am frightened!" she suddenly erupted "I don't want to die!" She broke down into a frightful sobbing that galvanized Kerrain's resolve. At once, he captured her delicate hands and kissed them. "My lady, I want you. I've always wanted you! Please love me. Please forgive me my duty..." Valorey interrupted by delicately reaching towards his face and passionately kiss him. She thrust her tongue into his mouth and reached for his pant belt. Kerrain, on fire, grabbed her shift and lifted it over her head. Kerrain's cock swelled instantly, growing down the side of his leg. Her round rosy red nipples were hard and constrasted the white flesh of her breasts. Kerrain seized her firm heart shaped dancer's ass and pulled her tightly against his torso. His mouth clamped hard on one nipple, then the other, sucking madly. Her breasts had the perfect firm resistance of youth. She released an animal like moan as his teeth pulled at the tip and frantically pulled off his clothes as he sucked. Completely naked, Kerrain's cock was erecting more and more, rising to a perpendicular angle from his body. The penis throbbed slightly with each beat of his heart . She pushed him away and fell backwards on to her pallet, spreading her dancer legs far apart, offering herself to him completely. A glimmer of moisture shined off her clitoris in the pale illumination of the cell. He knelt before her and examined her pussy. The thick snatch of black hair swelled above her smooth labia, gently parted to reveal the welcome of her wet vagina. Her scent caught his nostrils, sweet, pungent and musky. He pushed his tongue between her dripping clitoris and tasted her sex, drinking it with rising passion. Her muscular legs wrapped around his head, forcing her pubic hairs to mingle with his mustache. Now that he was on all fours above her, probing the depths of her vagina with his tongue, she pivoted so her mouth could capture the Lord's dangling, rock hard cock. She grasped its head delicately between forefinger and thumb and licked the dew drop of pre-come that clung to its tip. She nipped his scrotum with her lips and bit at his hair. With the tip of her tongue, Valorey began to lick the tip of his cock, which encouraged more precome to drip out. His precome was sticky and masculine, lubricating his penis. She noticed that the protruding blue and red veins of his cock pulsed in sync with his heartbeat. He was very close to coming. She licked her lips, trying her best to ignore the mounting orgasms beginning with his adept cunnilingus. She took a deep breath "My Lord! If I'm to go to my death, then I wish to give you this to remember me by!" She thrust his entire cock deep into her mouth, pressing so hard that her nose buried itself in his pubic hairs and the cock's head pushed deep into her throat ... Then bit down with as much force as her jaws would allow. At first, Kerrain stopped eating her, not quite sure at the mixed signals of pleasure and agony. Valorey whipped her neck and tore the partially severed penis away from his body with a rubbery snap. The combined taste of pre-come and blood was both disgusting and exhilirating. With a dancer's agility, she vaulted to her feet. Kerrain looked down and saw the ragged red stub coursing out blood. Kerrain howled as he correlated the pain with what happened and clutched his crotch, writhing in agony on the floor. Valorey spit the piece of meat into his face. "You'll remember me, wont you? Prickless bastard!" She grabbed his belt from the floor and searched for keys to the door. His keyring had over fifty keys! Damn! She knew she had only moments before a guard would charge into the door....aha! The guard would unlock the door, if she could overcome him, the freedom was one bit closer. She held Kerrain's belt taughtly in both hands. She waited. Nobody came. She thought about the consequences if she failed to escape. She would be thrown to the Godsnake. She would die in agony, crushed slowly in his coils, then swallowed whole. She shuddered. If she escaped, the Rector would find another sacrifice (maybe Maera?) and appease the Godsnake for their errors. The monster would understand if she escaped and would not punish her people. Sacrifices to the Godsnake are always given the opportunity to escape, and allowed to go free if they succeed. Nobody ever escaped from the Great Serpent once in the Fen Swamp, but she wasn't there yet. Her chance to escape was now. "That is correct young lady, but you will not escape from us. Your next chance will be in front of the Great Serpent. You are chosen and will be the sacrifice" Valorey jumped at the voice and wildly scanned the cell. Kerrain was moaning and trying to sit up; it wasn't his voice. Suddenly a figure materialized in front of her out of thin air. A tall, very thin man with graying shoulder length hair, wearing a black robe rimmed with gold and silver entwined serpent motifs all over the trim. The Rector. She realized his voice was issued from within her own head and didn't actually hear it. "Drop the belt and kneel before my presence!" the figure commanded. Valorey found she couldn't move to strike the figure, she was frozen. She glanced down and saw she had unknowingly dropped the belt. Involuntarily, she knelt on both knees towards the Rector. It was impossible to ignore his commands. She suddenly remembered she was completely naked. Her face and breasts were splattered with Kerrain's blood. Not only was she defeated, she was humiliated. "My dear, you must be prepared for the Godsnake, will you walk with me?" Screaming her frustration inside, her body did as it was commanded.

End Part One

End Part One

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