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Karak, Part 12


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Karak by Waldo
Chapter 9b & 10-Life as a Valdarian (12 of 12)

There are 10 chapters in 12 postings, which do not break
down into equal lengths. The synopsis is listed as Chapter
0. For purposes of putting them on Internet, I have broken
Chapter 5 into 5a - 5b and Chapter 9/10 into 9a - 9b
because those chapters were so long. The chapters are:

Chapter 0. A general discussion on writing this series
Chapter 1. Finding the Lair
Chapter 2. The Inn
Chapter 3. Town
Chapter 4. My time is up.
Chapter 5a & 5b. Maya
Chapter 6. Valdar
Chapter 7. Allegiance to Cak
Chapter 8. Lips can be used for
Chapter 9a & 9b & 10. Life as a Valdarian & (finish )
very short Ending Chapter

Although this story has a transgender hero/heroine, I
do not follow the concept that I observed in so many of
the TG stories where the main character describes in
detail over and over, the clothes that they are putting
on. Or how they apply their make-up and which colors
they use. I tried to describe what it would feel like to
wake up in a different body and to learn how to adapt to
that body's different needs. I tried to describe how a
macho man would think after he wound up as a woman
in a society where women are third class citizens.

The I tried to describe how he feels after the brain
washing session when she now has strong female
sexual desires for the person that she no longer hates.
If you were to miss Chapter 5A & 5B, you might not
even be aware of the sex change.

If these type of stories or sexual content are not your
"cup of tea"; or you are under age; then DO NOT READ
PAST THIS POINT IN ANY OF THE CHAPTERS.

Chapter 9 b

******

I spent a restless night. I did not believe the letter but I also did
not want to completely disbelieve it. About three am, I decided
to investigate some things. I am very familiar with the complete
village, except for a couple of big buildings that they call the
Training Center. And Maconda changed the subject every time
that I inquired as to their purpose.

I sneak out of the barracks, finding it easy to get past a guard
that is dozing. I manage to avoid all of the guards and am at the
Training Center. This building has two guards on duty at each
door and they are both awake. Why are the guards more alert
over here?

As I ease closer to the building, I hear someone coming. I hide
and see an officer approaching to check the guards. I am close
enough to hear them talk.

"Stay alert. We can't let any of our new arrivals leave before
they finish training." said the officer.

"You don't have to worry about us staying awake. What's going
on in the building? Are they working tonight?" asked one of the
guards.

The officer said "Training is a full month and can't commence
until the start of the trainee's period and it also has to end during
her next period. It would be nice if our new sister's periods
could be spaced out better, but we have to work when we can.
Stay awake."

After the officer walks off, I try the windows on the side, but all
windows are bolted and secured. I can see lights inside but
cannot see movement because the windows have been coated
with something that only lets light in. I find a tree on the far side
of one of the buildings and climb it. I am able to get onto the
building roof and walk on the roof until I get to a ledge. I follow
the ledge and find an unlocked door.

I enter the building and am in some sort of office. I don't dare
turn on any lights and open the door carefully. Down the hall, I
can hear voices talking. I ease down the hall and stand outside
the door where I hear the voices. I slowly open the door, being
careful to not make a noise or to be seen.

I see a naked woman fastened to a table, with several straps
fastening her to the table. Another dressed woman who appears
to be a doctor is seated beside her and is reading from a script.
She says "Cak is good. Cak is my master. Who is your
master?"

The woman fastened to the table says "Cak."

The doctor presses a button on a box beside her and the naked
woman smiles. Then the doctor says "Cak is my master. I will
die for Cak. He is my master. He is your master. You will die
for Cak. Who will you die for?"

The woman does not respond. The doctor presses a different
button and the naked woman shakes in agony. The doctor says
again "You will die for Cak. Who will you die for?"

The woman opens her mouth but does not say anything. The
doctor pressed the button again and the woman jumps with the
pain that she is feeling. When she quits jerking, the doctor
says "You will die for Cak. Who will you die for?"

The naked woman slowly says "I will die for Cak."

The doctor presses a different button and the naked woman
smiles as she feels a good sensation. Then the doctor says
"Cak is my master. I will die for Cak. He is my master. He is
your master. You will die for Cak. Why will you die for Cak?"

The woman says "He is my master."

"Good." said the doctor as she presses the button that causes
the woman to smile from the pleasure that she is feeling from the
button that was selected.

I have seen enough of this room. I know that I have never been
in this building before but everything is so familiar. Before I
open one door, I know what is behind it. I open it and step into a
room full of naked sleeping women fastened to tables, I know
that I have been in this room fastened to one of those tables.

I step back out into the hallway and go to another room. I
discover it is an office. I see a big book which I open and
discover it is a log book. I see that every woman that has
entered Valdar has been through this type of treatment and that
a line or two has been entered to describe her stay at the
Treatment Center. And then I see my name, which has three
pages dedicated to it. I quickly read their notes on me and an
anger builds within me. It is true. I am really Karak and they
have made me forget who I really am and my mission. As I read
the notes, my memory starts coming back and I remember what
they did to me. I remember the pain that they gave me, when I
gave an answer that they didn't want to hear and how they made
me feel good when I said the answer they wanted to hear. I
remember now how they controlled my body and used it against
me, making me forget the truth and remember only their lies.

In anger, I start to throw the book out the window and catch
myself in time. I cannot let them discover that I know yet or they
will put me through another visit to this treatment center. I look
around and see several of the little boxes that Maconda wears
on her belt. I have asked her about that box several times and
she never gave me a good explanation. Now, I know it is used
to control me and to activate different emotions within my body.
I take one of the boxes and slip out of the building the same way
that I went into it.

Although I did not sleep, I act as if I had a normal night's sleep. I
attend my prayer session, but this time, I do not mean the
prayers that my lips are saying. I go to my company area and
work with my soldiers, training them to fight. After the day is
over, I return to my quarters. Carah brings my son to me. As I
play with him, I realized that Cak is using him as a weapon
against me also. I cannot let anything happen to my child, even
if his father is Cak.

I look at Carah and realize why she always looked familiar to
me. They must have brainwashed her also. I quietly ask
"Carah, how long have you been in Cak's service."

"It is almost two years now." she replied.

"Why did you join our Sisterhood?" I asked.

Her voice changed very slightly, as if she was saying something
that she had memorized, not speaking from the heart. "My
former gods were false gods. I found salvation in serving Koor."

"Had you ever seen me before that night that I met you in Cak's
bedroom?" I asked.

"No, my lady." she replied.

I hand the baby over to her and watch her play with little Karak.
Then I reach under my covers and touch the box that I stole from
the Training Center. I point it at Carah, keeping it hid under the
covers so she can't see it and press one of the buttons. She is
playing with Karak and she suddenly starts crying.

I look at her and she says "I don't know what is wrong with me. I
just feel so sad."

I press a different button and she jumps. She looks at her body
and a blush covers her face. I press the button again and she
gives a slight shudder. She looks at me very embarrassed "I
haven't felt anything like this, since before my husband died. I
don't know how to explain it but I am very sexually aroused. It
must be my time of the month. First crying and then aroused."
she jokes.

I do not test any more buttons on her because in her
brainwashed state, she will report me to Cak or Maconda. I
know that I would have reported her yesterday if she had acted
differently. But today is a different story.

*******

Over the next several days, I learn the different buttons and
which emotions they arouse by testing them on unsuspecting
staff. I also tested them on myself and now know why I was so
aroused every time I got around Cak. They turned me on when I
was in his presence and I through it was because I was really
aroused by him. With their control over me, they could have
turned me on to a dog and I would have loved it as much. The
buttons control emotion. By pressing different combinations, I
was able to experience instant sexual desire, fear, confusion,
happiness, saddiness, energy, weakness, pain, anger, sleep,
and several other symptoms that were possible through
manipulation of my female hormones.

Now I know what they have done to me. They brainwashed me
with drugs and the box to forget my memories and remember
their memories. Then they put me in situations and activated the
emotion that they wanted. I thought it was my natural response
and accepted it as what I really wanted. Maconda would stand
behind me as I talked to Cak and would turn me into mush as he
talked to me. Then before she would leave me with him, she
would super activate my sexual drive.

The little box doesn't have much range. Only about twenty feet,
so I can't aim it at the whole kingdom and press the sex button
three times.

******

I sneaked into the training center again and stole some of the
drugs that they used to brainwash people. The next day, I tell
Maconda that we should visit an outlying village that is a day's
ride away because two women live there that would be excellent
warriors for my company. She has also heard about these two
women and agrees. We mount up and ride out of the castle. I
know that she has told Cak where we are going.

After we have been riding for two hours, I pretend that
something is wrong with my horse. As we check him out, I
switch water bottles with her. Then I take a big drink of my
bottle. She takes a drink from hers.

I watch her as we ride. She becomes quieter and is staring
straight ahead. I stop the horses and tell her to dismount. She
dismounts and her eyes are blank, although she is awake and
staring straight forward. I remove her box from her belt. She
does not resist even though she has never let me touch it
before. I command her to drink more water, which she does.

"Maconda, what is the purpose of this box?" I ask.

"It is used to control our warriors." she replied.

"I know that I am not Maya. Whom am I really?" I ask.

She did not hesitate "You are Karak."

"What is your purpose in the Sisterhood?" I asked.

"To control you and to keep you convinced that you are not
Karak." she said in a very flat voice.

I said "I know that I am Karak. You know that I am Karak. But
as you hid my memories, we hid your memories. You are really
Maconda, Captain in Karak's army. You joined Cak's
Sisterhood to protect me and to help me prepare to overthrow
his rule. You do not really believe in the Snake-God. It is time
that we refresh your memories. You want me to help you think,
to remember, to remember things before the false god confused
you. You want to serve me. You want to help me overthrow
Cak. You want your memories back." as I pressed one of the
buttons.

She smiled, although her eyes were still glazed over, as she
said "I want my memories back."

********

It took all day but at the end of the day, Maconda was on my
side. We rode all night so that we could be in the village at day
break. We quickly picked the thirty soldiers that we wanted and
took them several miles outside of town. With Maconda's help,
we had all thirty of them on our side by midnight. Although it
takes several days to first prepare someone, their mind becomes
more willing and pliable from then on. I think it has to do with
the vitamins that we all take daily.

We rode back to town. On the outskirts, we had all of our
recruits to hide, except for the two that Cak knew we were after.

I returned to my quarters and did not see a summons from Cak.
Although I was one of his favorite women, he had over 4,000 to
choose from and frequently had a new favorite. So I was not
surprised.

That night, we replaced the guards at the Training Center with
my own guards and we worked all night on the staff. When
daybreak came, the entire Training Center was mine. And they
knew what to do.

Each night, we would use Maconda's rank to secretly collect
troops and process them through my training center. The first
set of troops was my own selected group of fighters. Within a
week, fourteen hundred of the two thousand women in the castle
and outlying village were loyal to me. Once of the first things
that I had my new medical troops do, was to remove the little
piece of metal that they had inserted deep into my vagina two
years ago. Now the boxes could not control me any more.

Then Cak summoned me to his quarters. I knew the summons.
Although I preferred to wear my fighting gear and to get it over
with, I knew that his guards would not allow me enter his
personal quarters with weapons. I cleansed myself, put on a
fresh tunic and a ribbon in my hair, so I would look like the lover
that he was expecting.

As I waited in the outer chamber, I only wished that we could
have converted these guards already, but they lived in the castle
and would be difficult to get to the Training Center, without
causing problems. Finally they let me go back to Cak's
bedroom.

He was sitting in his chair, with a glass of ale. Koor was coiled
beside him. As I entered the room, Koor's tongue flickered and
the eyes became brighter.

Cak looked at me and said "There is something different about
you. Did you cut your hair?"

"No my lord. I just had Carah put it up differently."

"How little Karak?" he asked.

"He is growing. Every day, he inquires about the health of his
father and how he desires to see you." I said, trying to keep a
smile on my face and to hide my anger.

"Beautiful child. Although I do not like boy children, I will
tolerate him and let him live. I have been busy lately and have
not had time to relax with you or any or my other favorites. I
have been working on a plan to overthrow and enslave the next
kingdom. You will be the key to my plan and I will need your
support and your troops. You will lead the main thrust and will
be at the forefront of the battle. Before we send you off, I thought
that we would celebrate."

"That sounds good my lord." I said, bowing my head.

Koor hissed. At the sound, Cak jumped and looked at me. Then
he said "You have removed the donker from your body. You are
no longer Maya."

He knows that I am no longer under his control. I run across the
room and jerk my sword from the mantle where he has kept it on
display. I can barely hold the heavy sword out and he realizes
it. He starts laughing at me as I approach him. "You fool. You
stupid wench. I let you live. And I gave you a good life. You
would have led my army into battle. You would be the warrior
that you could never have been as a man. I would protect you
with my magic and let you kill my enemies. I gave you the
greatest honor by letting you bear my child. And I let it live.
Well, you stupid wench. I will let you live. Only I will turn you
into a whore. I will raise our son to be the warrior that you would
never be. And he will shoot his sperm into his favorite whore,
knowing that she was his mother."

I circled the room as he talked. The sword is too heavy and I
can't hold it out long. I am looking for another weapon that I can
use easier than this. I need a short sword. This thing weighs
too much and I will be lucky if I can swing it once. I know that he
will be able to dodge it because I can't swing it fast enough to
stab him. As I approach him, I realize that I only have one
chance and I decide to take it.

I raise the sword high so that I can use it's weigh as part of my
swing. He picks up a small chair and standing unafraid as I
approach him. He has a stupid grin on his face because he
knows that he can deflect my one and only swing at him, with the
chair.

So I swing but I do not swing it as he expect it toware him, but off
to the side so that the heavy weight completely misses him and
his waiting chair. And comes crashing down on Koor's forehead.
In slow motion, I see my sword slice into the serpent's skull.
Which was my target.

"Noooooooo" he screams and throws the chair at me, knocking
me down. He jerks the sword from Koor's brain as the dying
serpent's body convulses on the floor. I crawl over to my sword.
I am having difficulty moving because I think the chair broke my
ribs. I stand slowly and pick up the sword. As I approach Cak,
his back is turned to me as he holds the body of his dying god.

I can barely pick the sword up and have difficulty lifting it high.
He turns just as I put my last strength into my slash at his neck.

Then I pass out.

*******

My head hurts. My body hurts. As I open my eyes, I see that I
am in the Training Center. Standing over me, is the doctor that
brainwashed me years ago. I can't move because I am fastened
to the table. The doctor says "Good, you are awake. We did
not want to start this until you were awake so that you could
enjoy it."

As the doctor walks out of the room, I strain against my bonds. I
know that they will not show me any mercy and I do not desire to
live the rest of my life as a cock sucking whore for Cak's Army.

Maconda and Carah enter, carrying Karak. Maconda looks at
me and says "It was a bad battle. We both lost a lot of troops.
Although we outnumbered them, they were better fortified. We
found you lying on top of Cak's head. You were hurt and
delirious. I had you brought here because the castle is covered
with blood. You cut his head off and then passed out on top of
it. We wish to offer you the throne and want you to rule us."

I said quietly. "I wish for you to select Karak as your King. I will
rule the country in his behalf until he is old and wise enough to
be a real King. We will open our borders and let men join our
society. We will rule through goodness, and not through
brainwashing."

Maconda nodded.

Thus, it came to be. Maa's prophecies had come to pass. I rule
the kingdom, but am not king And Karak would be known as
the Wise King.

Chapter 10 - The end

At least of this saga. It is written that Maya did not have an easy
time. A lot of her troops were killed during the fighting. When
she quit using brainwashing techniques on her troops, a lot of
them wanted to leave and return to the villages where they
originally came from. Neighboring Kings wanted this valuable
piece of land and thought that it would be easy to take it away
from this frail, young woman with the big breasts. There are all
sorts of stories about where she really came from, and why she
keeps the dead warrior Karak's weapons hanging over her
fireplace mantle. But those are other stories to be told later as to
how she used her skills and her body to retain control over
Valdar.

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