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Karak, Part 6


All stories on this web site are purely FICTIONAL. The people depicted within these stories only exist in someone's IMAGINATION. Any resemblence between anyone depicted in these stories and any real person, living or dead, is an incredible COINCIDENCE too bizarre to be believed. If you think that you or someone you know is depicted in one of these stories it's only because you're a twisted perverted little fucker who sees conspiracies and plots where none exist. You probably suspect that your own MOTHER had sex with ALIENS and COWS and stuff. Well, she didn't. It's all in your head. Now take your tranquilizers and RELAX.

Karak by Waldo
Chapter 6 -Valdar (8 of 12)

There are 10 chapters in 12 postings, which do not break
down into equal lengths. The synopsis is listed as Chapter
0. For purposes of putting them on Internet, I have broken
Chapter 5 into 5a - 5b and Chapter 9/10 into 9a - 9b
because those chapters were so long. The chapters are:

Chapter 0. A general discussion on writing this series
Chapter 1. Finding the Lair
Chapter 2. The Inn
Chapter 3. Town
Chapter 4. My time is up.
Chapter 5a & 5b. Maya
Chapter 6. Valdar (this chapter)
Chapter 7. Allegiance to Cak
Chapter 8. Lips can be used for
Chapter 9a & 9b & 10. Life as a Valdarian &
very short Ending Chapter

Although this story has a transgender hero/heroine, I
do not follow the concept that I observed in so many of
the TG stories where the main character describes in
detail over and over, the clothes that they are putting
on. Or how they apply their make-up and which colors
they use. I tried to describe what it would feel like to
wake up in a different body and to learn how to adapt to
that body's different needs. I tried to describe how a
macho man would think after he wound up as a woman
in a society where women are third class citizens.

The I tried to describe how he feels after the brain
washing session when she now has strong female
sexual desires for the person that she no longer hates.
If you were to miss Chapter 5A & 5B, you might not
even be aware of the sex change.

If these type of stories or sexual content are not your
"cup of tea"; or you are under age; then DO NOT READ
PAST THIS POINT IN ANY OF THE CHAPTERS.

Chapter 6 - Valdar

I woke up before daylight and dressed. I put on my warrior
woman clothes and eased out of the inn. I carried the rest of the
gold coins with me and hid them when I got outside town. I
walked to the border and watched the sun come up before I rode
down to the border checkpoint on my horse. I was stopped at
the border by one of Cak's female border guards.

"Halt. No one enters without permission of our master." she
said.

"I have come to join you." I said quietly.

"No one can enter without proper papers." she repeated.

I eased my horse up to beside where she was standing. Before
she knew what I was doing, I kicked her in the chest and she
went down. As the other guards approached I said "You are
simple border guards. I am here on a mission of the utmost
importance to Cak. Now take me to him."

The guard that was in charge of the outpost looked at me and
then turned to one of the other guards and nodded. That guard
ran over to the corral and put a saddle on a horse. After she
had the horse saddled, she rode it over beside me. The guard
captain had written something down and gave it to my escort.

I smiled and rode forward. The border did not stop me. I was in
Valdar.

********

It was a day's ride into Valdar. All during the ride, I kept going
over how I felt about Cak in my mind. I wanted to see if anything
was changing and I noticed nothing. The escort took me to a
castle and turned me and the paper over to the castle guard.
The castle guard called for the Captain of the Guard. She read
the paper, laughed and said "Your mission will have to wait.
Cak is in his private sanctuary."

She took me to an inn in the village outside the castle and
ordered me a room, then said that she would like to join me for
supper. The inn was crowded and it seemed unusual to be in an
inn with only women. We sat down and the innkeeper brought
us our ale and meat. I was hungry and took a bite of my meat.
As I tasted it, I recognized a slight metallic taste and knew that
the meat was drugged. Possibly so was the ale. I looked at the
guard captain who was smiling at me and had not touched her
food or drink. And I felt very dizzy.

*******

I was on a bed in a cell and my weapons had been taken away
from here. There was about twenty cells and half of them had
women in them. The woman in the cell next to mine said
"Welcome to Paradise. I came here expecting a warm welcome
and got this. I take it that you are not one of Cak's elite guards
either. My name is Trkish."

"No, I am Maya. What happened?" I asked.

"You were drugged. I watch them carry you and some others in
here. They take all weapons away and check you to see if you
are a virgin. Then they will leave you locked up in for several
days. I have been here almost a week now." she said.

I paused and through about what she said "How do they check
to see if you are a virgin?" I asked.

"Ah, they got this little dildo that they slide into you once or twice
while you are asleep. Do you have any tobacco?" she asked.

"No, they left me with nothing but my clothes." I said.

Over the next two days, I saw what Trkish described as they
brought in new women. The jailers ignored my requests for
release as they ignored everyone's requests. Everyone within
the jail was like me, a new arrival in Valdar. Trkish and I talked
about what we knew and we quickly discovered the pattern.
New arrivals stayed until their period started. I confirmed this
when they opened Trkish's cell and escorted her out on the
morning that her period started. Which meant that I had five
more days until they took me out of here. They didn't bring
Trkish back to her cell and someone new was placed in it.

*******

My period started and they came for me. We walked over to a
building and into a room that had a big table with all sorts of bad
looking straps on it. They told me to undress. I refused. They
undressed me. It took them awhile, but they finally undressed
me and strapped me to the table.

A woman came in and stared at me. Then she said "Why did
you resist my soldier's orders."

"I came here to join Cak and to work with him. Not to be thrown
into jail and then man-handled by a bunch of dykes." I replied.

"Everyone goes through the same treatment. I did and so will
you. This makes sure that you are who you say you are and
why you are here." she said as a door opened and someone
wheeled in a cart with some items on it.

I said "Let me go. I must see Cak."

She tore off a strip of tape and taped my mouth shut. She
smiled as she did it. Then she said "I don't usually tell my little
pets what I am doing with them, but I will make an exception with
you. I am going to insert a little piece of metal into your vagina
that your body will retain. The metal has been magically
changed so that it becomes part of your body and takes control
of your body. Women are so much more emotional than men
and a large part of it is because of their hormones. Well, this
little device will control your hormones and will make you sad,
when we want you to be sad. And happy when we want you to
be happy. And horny when we want you be horny. You get the
ideal. It also can make you more receptive to hypnotic
suggestions. For the next month, we will work with you to mold
your thoughts to what we want you to think. When we are
finished with you in a month and take out this little piece of metal
and put your permanent metal in, you will be in love with Cak
and dedicated to giving your life for him. Whenever you make
love to a man, you will mentally be making love to Cak. You will
not remember that month of training and will only remember
entering the kingdom and falling in love with Cak."

I struggled against the bonds, but I could not move. They
spread my legs and lubricated my vagina. They put something
inside me and started spreading my vagina. It hurt. I wanted to
cry and scream, but the gag prevented my scream. Then she
picked up a little piece of metal and slid it into me. I felt her
finger pushing and a warm burning as she positioned it. Then
she removed the device that spread me open.

They left in the room for a long time. I don't know how long, but I
was having difficulty staying awake. Wait until they come back
and release me. I will kill that bitch. I will escape and rip that
fucking piece of metal out.

Finally the door opened and someone new entered. She looked
at my tape gag and said "We have told her not to do that. She
will be punished. My name is Maconda"

Then she removed the tape. As she unfastened me, I flexed my
arms. She was going to set me free. Finally there was only the
main strap across my chest. She reached on her belt and
removed a strange little device with different buttons. She
smiled as she pressed a couple of the buttons and pointed the
strange device at me. Stupid woman, the damn thing has no
affect on me. I wait, knowing that she will have to release me
soon. Finally she unsnaps the last strap and it falls to the side.
She says quietly "Stand and come with me."

I feel funny. Very funny. I am in control of myself, but I want to
go with her. I feel very peaceful She says "Follow me" and her
voice sounds very distant. She walks out of the room and I
follow her. I am still naked but I don't care. I only know that I
want to follow her. I trust her for some very strange reason.

We walk over to a desk where the woman that taped my mouth
is waiting. Maconda turns to me and says "Let her examine
you."

I stop in front of the woman that violated me. The woman that I
want to kill. But I don't want to kill her any more. I feel very
peaceful and relaxed. I just want to do what Maconda wants me
to do. The woman shines a light into my eyes and takes my
pulse. Then she says "She is ready. She has a tough
personality and will need close watching for the first several
days."

Maconda looks at me and says "Tell our sister thank you for
helping you prepare to join our cult."

I looked at the woman and said "Thank you."

Maconda says "Say it again and call her by her title, which is
Sister."

I say "Thank you, Sister."

Maconda looks at the first woman and says "She won't be any
problem at all." Then she looked at me and said "Come with
me."

I followed her into another room and down a hall. We entered a
room and she picked out a robe for me to put on. After I put it
on, I followed her down another hall. I saw Trkish coming out of
a room and said "Hi Trkish, they let me out too."

She looks up at me but there is no recognition in her eyes. Her
eyes are very dull and her pupils are very large. Then she says
"Welcome Sister. I am new to the Sisterhood and am here to
honor Cak."

I look at her blank eyes and know something is wrong but don't
know what. As I look at her, Maconda takes me by the arm and
leads me down the hallway. I look back. Trkish is still standing
there with that blank look on her face.

"What have you done to her?" I ask.

"Nothing. She is just going through training." she replied.

I tried to stop and look back. Maconda pointed her device at me
again and pressed another button. I felt very good. I wanted to
follow Maconda. I can talk to Trkish later.

Maconda led me into a room and told me to sit down. After I sat
down, she said to the woman behind the desk "I had to give her
a second jolt outside in the hallway when she recognized one of
the trainees and got too curious."

The woman behind the desk walked over and sat down next to
me. She quietly said "Who are you?"

"I am Maya." I replied.

She wrote something down and then continued "Why are you
here?"

"I came to kill Cak." I replied.

She looked up from her paper and asked "Why?"

"Because he pillaged my village and killed my parents." I said.

"When did he do this?" she asked.

"Almost twenty years ago." I replied. I liked this woman. I could
trust her. You can't trust the woman who put that metal in my
body. I feel so good. So warm inside and for the first time in a
long time, very relaxed.

"How old are you?" she asked.

"I am currently forty-three." I replied proudly.

She looked at me and said to Maconda "Get the Captain of the
Guard in here."

Then she pressed a button on her little box.

********

I like it here. I love Cak and what he stands for. He is the man
that I want to be my lover. I want him to be the father of my
children. I have never met him, but I know all about him. How
wonderful he is. How kind. He does so much for those of us in
the Sisterhood and asks so little in return. He provides this
wonderful home for us and keeps us safe from the men in the
outside world. I have so many wonderful friends here that love
me and that I love. I will do anything that Cak or any of his
officers ask me to do. I know that I am only a novice but I want
to be a leader within Cak's army. I want to help him destroy his
enemies, who would destroy us if they could.

I know a smile is on my face as I wake. I slowly set up and look
around my little room. My home. I get up and look at myself in
the mirror. I am very pretty and I hope that Cak will choose me
to spend the night with him soon. I know that he lets a different
woman sleep with him every night and he picks some favorites
out of those women. These are the women that will bear his
children and I hope that I am one of future mothers. That would
make me so happy.

I take off my nightgown and look at my body in the mirror. I have
a beautiful body and must take good care of it. Exercise and
diet is an important part of my life and I must maintain my
youthful appearance as long as possible. My breasts are so firm
and pert. I like the way that they ride high on my chest. I
tolerate wearing this wrap around my chest because it has sewn
cups that support and hold my breasts, so they don't sag.

I put on my toga and look at my ensigna, showing that I am now
in Cak's army. It was only yesterday that I arrived here. It was
easy. I just rode my horse through the gate and into the castle.
They fed me and showed me this room. Then last night, my new
friends welcomed me and made me feel at home. My best friend
is Trkish and I report to Maconda.

As I brush my hair, I think about the things that I must do to
correct the sins that I have committed because I didn't know any
better. If I ever see that damn Karak again, I will cut his nuts
off. The pig lied to me about Cak and tricked me into entering
Valdar to spy for him. I don't remember much about him except
that he was big, fat, old, mean, and ugly. Karak and his gang of
thieves kidnapped me and raped me. He tried to turn me into a
camp whore until he thought that he could use me in his plot to
destroy Cak. He wanted me to help him destroy Cak and this
beautiful kingdom because he wanted the land for his army of
barbarians. Luckily for me, Maconda understood what he did to
me and accepted me as her friend and invited me to join Cak's
little group. Karak won't be able to use me anymore.

I remember how good I felt last night when Maconda asked me if
I wanted to join the Sisterhood and how good I felt when I said
yes. That was the turning point of my life. I gave my vow to Cak
and the Sisterhood last night. I will remain faithful to Cak and
not have sex with any man unless Cak or one of his officer's
wants me to do. Then I will do it willingly. Not only will I give my
body to the cause but I will give my life also. I may be only
seventeen but I know what I want to do with the rest of my life.

Cak has built a Sisterhood, dedicated to Tak-Nor, the Snake-
God. Our purpose is to spread the teachings of Cak. We prefer
peace, but when peace does not work, we do not hesitate to use
force to show them the correct path. Our society is dedicated to
the one true god and to destroying all of the false gods. I
believe in Tak-Nor and his true priest on earth - Cak.

Today is my first full day in the Sisterhood and Maconda is going
to give me a tour. I like her. She is so friendly and nice. I will
do anything that she asks, because she is my friend. I can talk
to her and tell her how I feel, and share my thoughts with her.
Everyone here is so nice. That nice doctor yesterday said I was
in perfect health and gave me some vitamins to take. I take a
pill daily and have a weekly pill that I take also. Women's
bodies are susceptible to change and I have to take my vitamins
to make my periods easier.
 
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