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Karak, Part 1


All stories on this web site are purely FICTIONAL. The people depicted within these stories only exist in someone's IMAGINATION. Any resemblence between anyone depicted in these stories and any real person, living or dead, is an incredible COINCIDENCE too bizarre to be believed. If you think that you or someone you know is depicted in one of these stories it's only because you're a twisted perverted little fucker who sees conspiracies and plots where none exist. You probably suspect that your own MOTHER had sex with ALIENS and COWS and stuff. Well, she didn't. It's all in your head. Now take your tranquilizers and RELAX.
Karak by Waldo
Chapter 1 Finding the Lair (2 of 12)

There are 10 chapters in 12 postings, which do not break
down into equal lengths. The synopsis is listed as Chapter
0. For purposes of putting them on Internet, I have broken
Chapter 5 into 5a - 5b and Chapter 9/10 into 9a - 9b
because those chapters were so long. The chapters are:

Chapter 0. A general discussion on writing this series
Chapter 1. Finding the Lair (this chapter)
Chapter 2. The Inn
Chapter 3. Town
Chapter 4. My time is up.
Chapter 5a & 5b. Maya
Chapter 6. Valdar
Chapter 7. Allegiance to Cak
Chapter 8. Lips can be used for
Chapter 9a & 9b & 10. Life as a Valdarian &
very short Ending Chapter

Although this story has a transgender hero/heroine, I
do not follow the concept that I observed in so many of
the TG stories where the main character describes in
detail over and over, the clothes that they are putting
on. Or how they apply their make-up and which colors
they use. I tried to describe what it would feel like to
wake up in a different body and to learn how to adapt to
that body's different needs. I tried to describe how a
macho man would think after he wound up as a woman
in a society where women are third class citizens.

The I tried to describe how he feels after the brain
washing session when she now has strong female
sexual desires for the person that she no longer hates.
If you were to miss Chapter 5A & 5B, you might not
even be aware of the sex change.

If these type of stories or sexual content are not your
"cup of tea"; or you are under age; then DO NOT READ
PAST THIS POINT IN ANY OF THE CHAPTERS.

The Moment of Revenge

Chapter 1 - Finding the Lair

Finding the cave had not been easy and exploring the cave was
even worst. As I crawled through the narrow, twisting passage, I
probed with my extended sword to find any traps or deadly
bodyguards. In this tight space, there was no room to turn
around or to fight and this was the only passage left. My huge
muscular body would be a weapon against me in this tight
space. All of the other passages had turned into deadends.

I was fully extended and crawling as much as I could with one
hand holding my sword out and the other holding the burning
torch. Behind me, I towed several more unlit torches to light my
way as I explored the cave.

The cave widened and opened into a chamber. I smiled as I
was able to get off of my stomach and bloody knees and elbows
for the first time in over an hour. But my smile was short-lived as
I discovered that this chamber was a dead-end to my passage
also.

"Kalam", I exclaimed as I discovered another dead-end. I sat
down and ran my large dirty hand through my mane of dark
muddy hair.

As I rested, I thought about how many deadends I had come to
in the last twenty years. This cave had been my only remaining
potential access to Valdar.

Valdar, the protected kingdom of my enemy. Valdar, the land
where only women could enter. I had tried every place on the
surface to penetrate the barrier, but I could not walk through the
spell that stopped all men. I watched women enter and tried to
enter with them, but I would be stopped time and time again by
the invisible wall that protected this small kingdom.

Cak has strong medicine. Only Cak could take an entire
kingdom, granted a small kingdom compared to most of the
neighboring kingdoms, and put a protective spell around the
borders. Curse Cak and the lifetime that I, Karak of the
Cimmababas, had spent trying to find and kill Cak.

I laid back on the cold rock and rested my tired muscles. I was a
warrior and the best fighter. Ever since Cak killed my parents
and wasted the small village twenty years ago, I had been
searching for Cak, with the dedicated mission to kill Cak. Thus,
my travels had prepared me well for my task. My body was lean
and very muscular. The scars covering my body proved that I
was not afraid to fight and the fact that I was alive, proved that I
was very good at killing.

I had finally found Cak's lair. The kingdom of Valdar. No men
existed in there. Only women, who came and went as they
pleased, as they served Cak. While men could not enter, any
woman could. I had paid women to enter and report on what
they saw. When they returned, if they returned, they served
Cak. Veanak had tried to kill me in my sleep and she had been
my favorite woman before entering Valdar. She tried to act
normal, but my experience with other women made me cautious.
She told him about the beautiful land, about seeing Cak and
making love to him. She said that she only did it so that she
could find out what she needed to learn for my task. After she
told me about the castle layout, and that she discovered nothing
that could help me enter; we made love. After making love, I
pretended to sleep. I was ready when she slashed at me with
her knife and was able to deflect the blow. She was a good
fighter and would not surrender. As she lay dying, she told me
that I would never enter Valdar and that Cak did not want to
leave.

It was a strong spell that protected Valdar and turned my women
against me. When I discovered that I could not enter it from the
ground, I tried to enter it from underground and had explored
every cave and stream on all of the borders for the last two
years. This cave was the last cave and it had turned into a
dead-end also.

******

I exited the cave slowly. I had used my last torch and had to find
the exit in the dark. As I laid in the sunlight, I looked as my
bloodied and bruised body, from the cuts and falls taken in the
dark cave. I walked over to a stream and laid in it, letting the
cool water wash away the dried blood and grime.

"Karak" said the nearby voice.

I jumped and turned to face the direction of the sound. Three
warrior women were standing on a rock. They carried small
swords and spears. Their bodies were lean and a small smock
barely covered the breast through the hips. I recognized Lixu
whom I had not seen since she had entered Valdar under a
similar mission to mine. Her village had been pillaged during
Cak's last journey from Valdar and her husband and child had
been killed. I smiled when I recognized her but it quickly turned
to a frown when I recognized the insignia on her tunic indicated
an officer in Cak's all female army.

Lixu smiled and said "We have been waiting on you. You have
been in that cave for four days and nights. My fellow Valdarians
thought that you were dead, but I knew better. I said that we
should wait and you proved me right. There are no entrances
for men. Cak's magic protects him below ground as well as high
above ground. If you could ride the clouds and jump into Valdar,
you would discover that his magic would not let you enter. Cak
sent me with an offer for you. He is pleased with your
determination and strength. He offers you life. But only if you
leave and never search for him again. He is planning a raid next
spring and does not have to expend the energy to protect
himself from you outside Valdar. So he has an offer for you.
Leave in three days or expect death from any woman that you
ever cross path with. It is a generous offer, my friend. I advise
you to take it."

I looked at her and grunted "You entered Valdar to kill Cak.
What changed your mind?"

"I was wrong. I was young and foolish. After I entered Valdar, I
realized how much good he had done for his subjects. How he
took care of them and helped them. At first, I was confused and
was still very much determined to kill him. But as I got closer to
his castle, I discovered that my anger had left me. When I met
Cak face to face, I no longer felt the burning rage inside me.
Instead I felt peace. I remembered that Cak destroyed my
village but I remember my husband participating in doing the
same thing to other villages in his youth and knew that it was
wrong for my husband also. I talked with Cak and he explained
why I felt the way that I did. He helped me destroy the anger
within me and to replace it with pride in myself. He let me join
his army and train to serve him. When I made love to Cak, I
discovered true love. So I serve him because he is not my lord
and master, but he is my true love. I share him with my sisters
and defend him from those who would harm him. That includes
you, my old friend. When he asked me to take this mission, I
volunteered readily because I have fond memories of you, of
fighting beside you and wish you to live to a very old age. I
came to try to convince you to give up your quest. To listen to
words of wisdom and not words of anger. You know that I felt
the same wrong emotions that you now feel and I learned to
control them and to make my life better. I wish for you to do the
same." she said.

"What if I don't accept?" I asked

"Nothing will occur. For the next three days, that is. After that,
my sisters and I shall seek you out to kill you. And you will have
to kill us because we will not stop until we die." she sternly said.

"What if I accept?" I asked.

"You must prove that you accept by leaving this area and going
elsewhere. You can go anywhere that you want." and she
blushed as she smiled and said "And my sisters and I will go
with you. We will serve you as we serve our lord and master.
We will fight for you and bear your children. We will belong to
you for you to use us as you desire."

I looked at Lixu. I had slept with her before and had enjoyed her
company. I also knew that she was a fierce fighter and knew
how to use her weapons. I looked at the other two women who
were also attractive and appeared quite equal to holding their
own in a bed or on a battlefield. One of them was a dark woman
from one of the tribes to the far east, while the other was very
fair skinned and her flowing blond hair was only found among
the sea-tribes to the north. The dark woman had very large
breasts bulging behind her tunic.

I quietly said "You would do this of your own free will."

"Gladly. I can serve my master in various ways. By becoming
your lover, I can help you while I serve him." she said.

"What happens if I accept your offer and then later decide to go
after Cak again?" I asked, already knowing the answer.

"You would not live to find him. But enough talk. Cak knows
that you need time to think about his very generous offer. So if
you are not leaving this area on the morning of the fourth day
from today, we will kill you. Until then, we are your servants."
she said flatly.

"No thanks." I said, knowing that I could not trust them enough to
go to sleep with them.

"Your choice. We will be in town. All you have to do, is ask.
We will be easy to find." she said. And they turned and walked
away.

I watched them walk up the hill. The dark skinned one looked
back over her shoulder and smiled at me. Under other
circumstances, I would have gladly accepted their offer to let me
bed them.
 
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